User talk:Jpate46/sandbox

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Good start.

My only suggestion would be for this sentence:

"Usually, a three-generation family history would be required in order to establish that the patient is suffering from a mitochondrial disease."

I think you could expand on this a little bit - specifically, explain why a three generation history is needed.

Great job overall!

Vellichor (talk) 02:42, 5 November 2015 (UTC)