JudahPrerna

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Regarding your recent edit

Hi, your last edit is reverted as your edit was not relevant to the article itself. If you like to make suggestion on the article, please do so in its talk page. ♠ ÆCE | Talk | 19:35, 1 September 2020 (UTC)

Sorry for that but If someone can please provide the full plot for season 2 I'd appreciate it,I could edit it myself but I've forgotten some inbetween storylines. JudahPrerna (talk) 19:49, 1 September 2020 (UTC)

Zee World

I am literally asking for one neutral, true, and good source as to the network's schedule that isn't the network's website. Only one. It hasn't been provided this entire year. We are not the Zee World promotional department, and until a good quality source can be provided, we're not showing the network's shows. We have an entire programming list that does the job just as well. Nate • (chatter) 21:14, 1 September 2020 (UTC)

MOS:HEAD

Hi there, re: these edits, a few things. Having multiple translations and international titles just clutters up the lede. You have to be aware that the first sentence of the lede is just that, a single sentence, and jamming multiple translations divided by slashes, including multiple parentheticals, etc. is just not how we write in a professional English tone.

Also, the plot content should have been a level 2 heading on the page, with level 3 subheadings beneath that. The extra bold-faced headings you added are unnecessary, since you could probably just explain whatever you had to explain at the start of the next sentence, like I did by shifting "Generation leap" to prose.

Please see MOS:HEAD for more information about headings, and since you are new and are working on television articles, you should familiarise yourself with our Manual of Style for Television articles, as it represents community consensus for how articles should be structured and look.

For instance, you shouldn't be using multiple actors names on a single cast section bullet as you did by introducing Manasi Varma to "Roshni Chopra/Manasi Varma as Piya Dixit". Slashes are sloppy and ambiguous, and it can't be easily determined why there are two names there. Did two people play the character at the same time? Did they alternate? Did one replace the other? Which one was first? This is a HUGE problem in Indian TV articles. We see lots of casual editors who don't think beyond the superficial and wind up making changes that are more confusing than the content they changed. Per WP:TVCAST, cast is listed chronologically, so if a new cast member replaces another, they would be added to the bottom of the list, preferably with some sort of explanation, like:

• Ashok Kumar as Abishek Agarwal: In 2020, Kumar replaced Patel as Abhishek. Producers alleged that Patel was fired for being abusive to other cast members.

And please see Template:Infobox television's instructions, as these can be confusing as well. Thank you. I know it's a lot to digest, so if you have questions, please feel free to ask. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 00:19, 2 September 2020 (UTC)

I did what I felt was necessary and yes Manasi Varma did replace Roshni Chopra in the show but her name wasn't in the cast list, maybe if you watched the show you would know about it but you only want to do what suits you which is unfair to all editors JudahPrerna (talk) 13:46, 2 September 2020 (UTC)