Juhis2309
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:19, 25 February 2019 (UTC)
Val's Review!
editHello!
I thought that your article had a lot of great information! I think that if you can find info on if the host eggs and the Nomada's eggs are similar in size? Also maybe another piece of info that you could add would be if the bees that they are laying their eggs in, are they mothers of those nests still tending to their larvae or are they not coming back to their nests. Maybe talk about how their diet changes from egg to adult as well, do they eat pollen when they are larvae but then only nectar as adults? Maybe add a little about life cycle and how long they live and where they are found. Super awesome so far! I know a lot of this stuff maybe hard to find because you are doing a genus and not a species but its really informative! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Valxoxo48 (talk • contribs) 19:15, 12 March 2019 (UTC)
Ameen's Peer Review
editWell done! I would just replace the phrase "They are often extraordinarily wasp-like in appearance" with something like "They closely resemble wasps", just to avoid using a subjective adjective. Otherwise, the lead is really strong. The parasitism section is clear, informative, and interesting. All this article needs is more information on any other unique characteristics of this species, which I'm sure you are already working on. Keep up the great work! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ameenlotfi (talk • contribs) 19:37, 12 March 2019 (UTC)