Juren Khatri

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tourism Development Bank Ltd (November 3)

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Gab4gab (talk) 15:18, 3 November 2016 (UTC)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Tourism Development Bank Ltd (November 9)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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SwisterTwister talk 04:25, 9 November 2016 (UTC)

November 2016

Hello, I'm Lourdes. I wanted to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions to Tourism Development Bank have been undone because they appeared to be promotional. Advertising and using Wikipedia as a "soapbox" are against Wikipedia policy and not permitted. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about Wikipedia. The reason why your initial draft for the same bank was rejected was very clearly mentioned -- and that was that it looked like an advertisement for the bank. I invested quite a lot of time to ensure that the article was moved into main space. Please don't disrespect my effort by making the article a promotional tool for the bank. I have removed the Facebook link, the Vision and Mission statement of the bank from the article. Please try and read Wikipedia's editorial policies and guidelines before attempting to edit articles here. And yes, please, no more promotional stuff. Feel free to ask me for help on my talk page. Thanks. Lourdes 06:13, 16 November 2016 (UTC)