KACherniss

Hiya, KACherniss!

Howdy, KACherniss. I'm Theo, your Online Ambassador for the New Media Technology and Communication online Wikipedia course, and I'll be here to help if you run into any problems. I've left a welcome message here that has some useful info, including my email address. Give it a look, and let me know if you need anything! —Theopolisme (talk) 12:18, 5 February 2013 (UTC)

Campus Ambassador (in training)

Hi, KACherniss, This is Conner Baldwin (Yjx2ic35). Please examine the case sensitivity of your term "internet." A suggestion is going to http://foldoc.org and comparing the lowercase and uppercase terms. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yjx2ic35 (talk • contribs) 17:31, 27 February 2013 (UTC)

Feedback on your work

Nice additions to content!

Consider making the following grammatical changes:

• "businesses are able to keep all of their networks up-to-date"
• "all of that on your own, so having a service that can do all that"
• "Professional network services started back in 1997 and goes all the way to the present day"
• "Boyd and Ellison go on to say"
• "which may or may not be well written"

Mgantony (talk) 16:41, 4 March 2013 (UTC)

Feedback

This is looking pretty good! There are some grammatical & content issues that you may need to fix.

• Change / re-word this sentence to sound more objective & neutral: "It's hard remembering all of that on your own, so having a service that can do all that helps relieve some of the stress when trying to get things done."
• Reword: "started back in 1997 and goes all the way to the present day"
• Reword this sentence for grammar (subject-verb agreement) & tone: "Within a professional network service, there is a lot that goes into it, such as the amount of hours that go into them, the type of people they work for, as well as the business model of it all, such as the professional interaction and the multiple services they deal with."
• Consider deleting: "Not all services are online sites like LinkedIn."
• Change to "Kaplan and Haenlein discuss the five points"
• Consider rewording / deleting: "When it comes to the social impact that professional network services have on today's society, it has proved to have shown a major increase in activity."
• Consider rewording: "Since the internet and social media is apart of this..." Also "apart" is incorrectly spelled.

Mgantony (talk) 14:25, 17 March 2013 (UTC)

Good job!

Great job on developing the original stub. Nice work! Mgantony (talk) 23:29, 25 March 2013 (UTC)

A kitten for you!

Nice work on your class project!

Mgantony (talk) 23:41, 25 March 2013 (UTC)

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