User talk:Kaitlynknoll/sandbox

Kaitlyn--You're off to a start, but I think you overlooked the fact that you are adding to a pretty substantial pre-existing article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bourbon_Reforms It does not make sense to rewrite the introduction that already exists. You're supposed to be adding new material, not re-inventing the wheel. So, I think you need to spend some time working on those sections that you are actually contributing to the pre-existing article (on the church, etc). This means you've got a lot to do and you need to be writing with the secondary sources as your starting point and guide. Not writing your own ideas and later finding the sources to fill them in. Feel free to come by to discuss at any point as you keep working. Cz17 (talk) 16:43, 3 November 2017 (UTC)