User talk:Kalkot/sandbox

Peer Review by Melissa

Hi there!

Very interesting topic and great additions!

Just a few suggestions:

In your second paragraph ("today glass blocks are used.."), you talked about the application of glass bricks. Maybe you can elaborate on why they shouldn't be used in floor application. Towards the end of the paragraph, you starting talking about the manufacturing of glass bricks, maybe you can start a new section about that topic.

In the third paragraph ("The texture and color of glass blocks.."), you discussed a few different subjects: color and texture, their application, and briefly mention that them are used to construct curtain walls. There's some overlap with what you talked about in the second paragraph, maybe you can combine and reorganize them into clearer sections about the same subject matter: 1. manufacturing 2. application 3. structural limitations

Thanks! Melissa Luo (talk) 19:32, 19 November 2017 (UTC)

Instructor comments

You've drafted some good additions, and I agree with your peer reviewer's comments. In addition, consider describing critical differences between (typically hollow) glass block and the (possibly more solid) prismatic glass used in sidewalk vault lights. Also, you can use Template:Convert to provide automatic SI conversions of U.S. customary measurements.

Elizabeth Linden Rahway (talk) 03:41, 27 November 2017 (UTC)