User talk:Kambeau/Calliope St.

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You're doing some nice work here. Great job include the phonetics in the lead! Your lead mentions access to common tourist attractions, but there's no reference to those in the actual article. I hope that's a section that will be added as your revise. The "Decline" subsection is also very nice. You might want to look at the history of home prices, or many some other historical economic information that would support your description.

Many of your statements don't have citations to support them. Let's make sure every fact is properly sourced and cited. When revising, slow down and explain some of the names you include here. It's great that you've linked to articles on the Calliope Projects and Adrien De Pauger, for example, but you can still include a bit of information about them here in your article. For example, you might extend your first sentence like this: "In its earlier days, Calliope Street was a part of the original boundary streets that surrounded the Calliope Projects, a 56-acre housing development built in the early 1940s and demolished in 2014." That will make for a richer, more meaningful article.

Nice work so far!

jtodd1973 21:48, 6 March 2021 (UTC)