Karimrowel
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:33, 13 February 2018 (UTC)
NS1150 article selection
editHi Karimrowel,
You picked four very high quality articles to edit! Of the four I think the one that could use the most editing would be "Protein (nutrient)" HOWEVER, these are all highly technical and would require a high level of writing synthesis to add to the articles themselves. We would also have to be very careful about finding the appropriate resources to support your edits. I will go ahead and assign you to edit "Protein (nutrient)" but please send me a message if you would like to change your article choice to something a bit more straightforward for the purpose of this class. I can help with article selection as well! Let me know if you have questions. Saguaromelee (talk) 15:11, 26 February 2018 (UTC)
Feedback on annotated bibliography
editYou've done a nice job annotating and analyzing these articles and have correctly noted some of the weaknesses (e.g. animal studies, small sample sizes, etc) and strengths. Especially since Wikipedia privileges secondary articles, especially systematic review articles and meta-analyses, I'd suggest trying to find some of these (try the filters in in PubMed) to bolster your argument. Camand74 (talk) 18:06, 8 May 2018 (UTC)