User talk:Katetwowiki/sandbox

1. 1. The history section is not clear, due to the changing names of the department. Perhaps a description that better than the reference page is required to demonstrate the relationship between names and disciplines.

1. 2. Adding more abbreviations of the institutes/departments is necessary, which can alleviate readers' memory.

1. 3. Should link the technologies to their links.

1. 4. Biased sources, which are all from official introduction page.

Sunt727 (talk) 01:59, 29 November 2017 (UTC)

Thank you for your good suggestions, Sunt! --Katetwowiki (talk) 17:58, 11 December 2017 (UTC)

Comment from Vacuum Dyson

In general, the wikiproject is exhaustive, nice. And there are some suggestions for you to write better.

1.Maybe it will be better if you say it is an introduction of a department of Qinghua University.

2.As SUNT stated, use abbreviation will increase fluency.

3.Add more detail about its history.

Vacuum Dyson (talk) 16:36, 29 November 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for your good suggestions, Dyson! --Katetwowiki (talk) 17:58, 11 December 2017 (UTC)