Kbernock6
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Your submission at Articles for creation
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- Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! QuantifiedElf (talk) 20:20, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
A barnstar for you!
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| Good job on your efforts with the Key Ring article! QuantifiedElf (talk) 20:23, 15 July 2013 (UTC) |
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Your submission at Articles for creation
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Working on Key Ring
editHi Kbernock, I suspect that you are affiliated with Key Ring in a Marketing and Advertising capacity. Either way, please read up on Wikipedia's policies on neutrality and how Wikipedia is not a means of promotion. Key Ring is notable, but the promotional content in your article needs to be addressed. Let me know if you want help. QuantifiedElf (talk) 21:03, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
Need Some Help with Key Ring
editHi QuanitfiedElf, thanks for reaching out. I am struggling with writing the page without it sounding promotional. Do you have any recommendations or specific comments? I am striving to make the page as neutral as possible. I appreciate the feedback.
Kbernock6 (talk) 21:12, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
- You're nearly there! You've removed the lists, which is an improvement, and the tone of the article is neutral now. The only thing you should do now is provide citations for the Features section. For example, when you claim that the following barcodes are compatible, you need to provide a reliable source to support that claim. Same goes for "Cards are stored by either scanning the barcode on the back of the card or manually typing in the UPC number." You might also consider a more in-depth citation format, such as the cite web template. QuantifiedElf (talk) 21:43, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
- Congrats on getting your article approved at AfC! QuantifiedElf (talk) 20:40, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
- You're nearly there! You've removed the lists, which is an improvement, and the tone of the article is neutral now. The only thing you should do now is provide citations for the Features section. For example, when you claim that the following barcodes are compatible, you need to provide a reliable source to support that claim. Same goes for "Cards are stored by either scanning the barcode on the back of the card or manually typing in the UPC number." You might also consider a more in-depth citation format, such as the cite web template. QuantifiedElf (talk) 21:43, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
Thanks for all your help!!
Thanks!
editFor both your persistence and for the fact that in reviewing the article, I learned of the app, which is now on my phone! It is getting there and you are getting some good advice from QuantifiedElf The Ukulele Guy - Aggie80 (talk) 17:43, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
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