User talk:Kentlogan3/sandbox

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Kairyth

Hey Logan,

Well done!

  • Excellent work! 1000 words AND a picture, nice job!
  • Great citations, excellent use of inline citations and internal Wikipedia links.
  • You might want to consider writing out some of the acronyms (QMED, MEBA) since what those stand for are not common knowledge outside the maritime professions.
  • You might also want to spell out the significance of the high percentage of the workforce over 55, why is that important to employment prospects?

Kairyth (talk) 17:16, 6 April 2016 (UTC)Reply