User talk:Ketchum.e/sandbox

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Mayam37

Hi Ellery! I really liked your contributions and I think it is very important that you are adding criticisms and controversies of The Daily Wire. The last section about the Facebook pages is so interesting, I would love to learn more about it! In the first sentence of the criticisms section, you mention 3 different instances that I think don't exactly mesh in the sentence. Maybe make a new sentence and elaborate on them and how they relate or the false claims that he made about the instances. Also, I think there is some history as to why he moved the headquarters to Tennessee (LA was too liberal for him), maybe you could add a bit about that for context? I would also love to learn more about how the movies/films section is related–which I'm sure you will add! Overall I think this will be a great addition to the article for context around the show and necessary criticism.


Maya's peer review for Ellery: - I liked the way you're reorganizing the page and adding more context around the current staff and their projects - I would suggest adding prices/what is included in each tier of membership in the 'Daily Wire Membership' section - I like the criticism and controversy section and wonder if you could expand on it? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mayam37 (talkcontribs) 16:28, 3 March 2021 (UTC)Reply