Kgpds
Joined 11 December 2021
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Ferret in topic December 2021
Akane Yamaguchi
editHere are some advice to improve Akane Yamaguchi article:
- Expand lede, shold be based on MOS:LEAD. Lede should not only include the list of achievements, but also in the third paragraph, should add other interesting facts about Yamaguchi.
- Lede is over sources. It would be great to use the achievements summary of Yamaguchi rather than using separated sources just like references #3–11.
- For statement and sources: Avoid having all capital letters in titles, even if partially per WP:ALLCAPS. (Wrong –> "ASIAN JUNIORS 2014 Finals - Akane and China Win", Correct –>Asian Juniors 2014 Finals - Akane and China Win".) See also: WP:CS.
- The separated sources in lede can be move to Career section.
For now this is my advice. Let me know if you have finished, and i will tell the other errors. Thx Stvbastian (talk) 08:01, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
- Stvbastian The third dot is completed, the remaining three dots are difficult, because I am a new member, so I have very little experience. Can you do it for me? Kgpds (talk) 13:20, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
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