User talk:Khan ali10/sandbox

review

I think that you've done a really good job on this article. You have really expanded the ideas of the theories. I think that the only thing that could be done to make this article better is to cite more. It seems that a lot of the information doesn't have a cite, but that could be because it was just your general knowledge. Also I would try to add a little bit more information on each of the books. Other than that your article looks really good. You added a lot of good information! Ashblackburn (talk) 19:01, 4 June 2013 (UTC)