Khughe26

Please leave me comments with your signature , Thank you Khughe26 (talk) 14:11, 20 September 2012 (UTC)

Peer Review

Hello Khughe26, good job on your first Wikipedia article edit. I like the empirical paper you selected and your citation. I think you are headed in the right direction as far as improving the quality of information, however you may want to expand on your findings regarding "evidence supporting a positive outlook on imaginary companions later in childhood". Perhaps you could add a section about Imaginary companions later in childhood, or improve on the clarity/organization by breaking the article up into more sections, because as of right now it only has an introduction and a section on Theories. You may also want to edit what someone else has contributed to the article instead of just adding content of your own. Good job and good luck with the final version. Krowe24 (talk) 01:43, 2 November 2012 (UTC)