User talk:Kllamanzares/Comstock Saloon

Drafting

Your sourcing looks pretty good. Next step, planning - - how will you organize your article? (I'm going to ask you to work with Rosa - - as she is focusing on an article/topic similar to yours. Remind me in class.) ~~~ ProfHanley (talk) 16:52, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

Draft

The draft is shaping up. You might want to link to the existing Wikipedia page so that your peer editors can gauge your work. Keep going! ProfHanley (talk) 17:39, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

Draft II

This draft is looking good. Before sprucing up - - with images and/or more links - - do some line editing to make the prose a bit smoother. I've bolded some areas I think you need to review. ProfHanley (talk) 17:53, 6 November 2023 (UTC)