Kristen672
Hello and welcome to my talk page. --Kristen672 (talk) 18:29, 6 March 2012 (UTC)
Graduate Managing Editor
editHi Kristen! Just checking in to see how your wiki project is coming along. You picked an interesting stub to edit-there is lots of content here to work with. I was very impressed with your work on the repertoire chart-this is packed with some great and valuable information for the reader. It looks like most of your editing work will come from the History section of the page. I would suggest that you try to condense and tighten this section, and maybe cut some unnecessary information. You may also want to think about breaking it down into other sections such as 'Present', 'Founders', etc.-this way the reader does not get putt off by such a lengthy section. Please let me know if you have any questions or need assistance. Best of luck :)--Sosorno (talk) 04:16, 3 May 2012 (UTC)
I didn't know about the Blue Stars Drum and Bugle Corps. Seems interesting! --Autumnfireflies (talk) 23:33, 10 May 2012 (UTC)
I found your topic quite unique. This has some information on it. http://www.worlddrumcorpshof.org/Chadwickcrawford (talk) 11:43, 11 May 2012 (UTC)
Instructor
editHi Kristen! Thanks for posting on my Talk Page, and good luck with editing Wikipedia. --Mportolano (talk) 15:30, 8 March 2012 (UTC)
Ġ== Articles ==
Drum and bugle corps (modern) (Copy-edit; some content editing)
Blue Stars Drum and Bugle Corps (Content editing)
Kristen, amazing additions to the Drum and bugle corps (modern) article. The Repertoire section shows your skill as a Wiki-editor! Nice work!--EmilyRGreene (talk) 17:57, 11 May 2012 (UTC)
I thought you did a wonderful job with adding the Repertoire section and a list of Blue Stars shows. You did extensive content editing for this. --Amouzone (talk) 20:00, 11 May 2012 (UTC)
Wow, Kristen! Way to go above and beyond with the chart. I'm impressed with the amount of work you manged to put into your protects. You really know your stuff!--Sphill9 (talk) 02:41, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
This page looks great !! Definitely potential for a feature article, it looks like you have mastered Wikipedia ! --Kaitlyn,jones (talk) 04:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)