1/30/18 Evaluation by User:guyarv
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editMeets Standards (run-on sentence in sentence 1, odd phrasing sentence 4)
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editExceeds Standards (All is relevant, even the bit about Louis XIV)
Sources
editMeets Standards (I could not find citation 1 online in English, do you have the link? I am a bit concerned about "Venetian Glass" source. It appears to be a glass webstore rather than a reputable information source on glass)
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editMeets standards ("Venetian Glass" citation needs date/etc info added, not just URL)
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I enjoyed your paragraph very much. I had no clue the Venetians were so involved in glass and mirrors. Looking forward to reading more.
2/01/2018 Evaluation by User:avictory
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editMeets Standard (Replace "their" with "its" in first sentence; Venice is a singular noun so the pronoun should be too. First sentence is a run-on; could be reworked into two separate sentences. Perhaps put "Hall of Mirrors" before the word Versailles, so you can avoid having to figure out if it's "Versailles' Hall..." or "Versailles's Hall...". "So that way" in the last sentence sounds a bit off... maybe take out "way" and see how that sounds.)
Language
editMeets Standard (Not yet in an encyclopedic tone; perhaps you could shorten the sentences so each only has one fact (permitting). Using passive voice whenever possible also helps.)
Organization
editExceeds Standard (Logically organized and good flow.)
Coding
editExceeds Standard (As far as I can tell, it looks good!)
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editExceeds Standard (Information seems legitimate.)
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Sources
editMeets Standard (I had to google source 1, but I still couldn't access it to tell if it was in English or Italian. Hesitant about source 2; perhaps you could find another source to corroborate the info. and then cite both.)
Citations
editMeets Standard (The first sentence could use a citation.)
References
editMeets Standard (Link for reference 1 doesn't open because author's surname is misspelled. None of them seem to have dates.)
Overall, I think your content is great! It's just that the sentences need reworking a bit.