Hi Kyle! Welcome to Wikipedia! I've done a quick review of your article draft here. I'm impressed with your consistent use of inline citations; good job with those! Most of the things you need to work on are formatting issues. I know Wikipedia formatting is a really tricky thing, so don't hesitate to contact me for help on my talk page or by email. Cheers! sonia♫ 06:00, 27 January 2012 (UTC)