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Latest comment: 7 years ago by Raekai in topic Sandbox review for Psycholinguistics class
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Sandbox review for Psycholinguistics class
editFirst and foremost, your formatting is great. For Fluency, that sentence needs to not be a fragment, and it also looks like it might need a source. However, your section on Multilingualism looks better. That first sentence needs some cleaning up because it doesn't quite make sense. The rest of it looks good, but the citations need to be put after the sentence rather than tucked in behind the period. Your tone is fine for Wikipedia as far as I'm concerned. You also need at least one more citation to meet the assignment's requirements. Raekai (talk) 13:46, 25 April 2017 (UTC)