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Your submission at Articles for creation: Surgically Targeted Radiation Therapy (STaRT) For Brain Tumors (April 14)

Latest comment: 4 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This is a promotional press release, not an encyclopedia article.

Please rewrite with use of the generic term, not the trade name. (You can mention the trade name once, but once only, and eve there , omit the R symbol.

don't use empty promotional phrases like "addresses the unmet need for" or "which make life easier for patients with brain tumors and their caregivers". Rather, Say what it is, and what it does.

Indicate the actual individual inventors, not just the company to which the patent was assigned, and make sure there is a clear reference to its first report in the medical literature, and to the doucment ofr the DFDA approval. Say who developed it, giving the apropriate references.

Avoidmaking multiple reference to the company's web site.

And, Since this is your only contribution, and since it is written in exactly the format of a press release, it is reasonable to ask whether you are a connected contributor, in which case you must declare the connection. Please see our rules on Conflict of Interest If,aswould seem likely, you are writing this for pay or as a staff member of the organization, see also WP:PAID for the necessary disclosures.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Surgically Targeted Radiation Therapy (STaRT) For Brain Tumors and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Surgically Targeted Radiation Therapy (STaRT) For Brain Tumors, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

DGG ( talk ) 23:49, 14 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Hello, LDobbs! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! DGG ( talk ) 23:49, 14 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Help me!

Latest comment: 4 years ago2 comments2 people in discussion

This help request has been answered. If you need more help, you can ask another question on your talk page, contact the responding user(s) directly on their user talk page, or consider visiting the Teahouse.

Please help me with... Hi, I resubmitted my article and it's not showing up anywhere, including my history - what could have happened? LDobbs (talk) 20:40, 19 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Are you referring to Draft:Surgically Targeted Radiation Therapy (STaRT) For Brain Tumors? It was resubmitted and the edit history indicates that you did so with this edit. 331dot (talk) 20:52, 19 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Surgically Targeted Radiation Therapy (STaRT) For Brain Tumors (August 12)

Latest comment: 4 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia.

Wikipedia cannot accept material copied from elsewhere, unless it explicitly and verifiably has been released to the world under a suitably-free and compatible copyright license or into the public domain and is written in an acceptable tone—this includes material that you own the copyright to. You should attribute the content of a draft to outside sources, using citations, but copying and pasting or closely paraphrasing sources is not acceptable. The entire draft should be written using your own words and structure. Note to reviewers: do not leave copyright violations sitting in the page history. Please follow the instructions here.

You are welcome to write an article on the subject, but please do not use copyrighted work.

Draft:Surgically Targeted Radiation Therapy (STaRT) For Brain Tumors may be deleted at any time unless the copied text is removed. Copyrighted work cannot be allowed to remain on Wikipedia.
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Fiddle Faddle 19:13, 12 August 2020 (UTC)Reply

AfC notification: Draft:Surgically Targeted Radiation Therapy (STaRT) For Brain Tumors has a new comment

Latest comment: 4 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Surgically Targeted Radiation Therapy (STaRT) For Brain Tumors. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 21:03, 14 September 2020 (UTC)Reply

Concern regarding Draft:Surgically Targeted Radiation Therapy (STaRT) For Brain Tumors

Latest comment: 3 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hello, LDobbs. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Surgically Targeted Radiation Therapy (STaRT) For Brain Tumors, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Draft space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for article space.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion under CSD G13. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it. You may request userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available here.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. Bot0612 (talk) 22:10, 14 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Surgically Targeted Radiation Therapy (STaRT) For Brain Tumors (May 9)

Latest comment: 3 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

It might help reduce the promotional tone if you used the full name, not the trade name, and if you didn;t discuss how it worked in terms of "advantages". Like other therapies it will have has advantages in certain situation, not necessarily in general

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Surgically Targeted Radiation Therapy (STaRT) For Brain Tumors and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Surgically Targeted Radiation Therapy (STaRT) For Brain Tumors, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

DGG ( talk ) 01:56, 9 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your draft article, Draft:Surgically Targeted Radiation Therapy (STaRT) For Brain Tumors

Latest comment: 1 year ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hello, LDobbs. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Surgically Targeted Radiation Therapy (STaRT) For Brain Tumors".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 06:56, 7 January 2023 (UTC)Reply

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