Lanthum

First Vision article

First of all, if you are new to Wikipedia I want to welcome you. I have been editing since 2003, largely in Mormonism-based articles, and am happy when new editors take an interest in the subject.

In the First Vision article, I notice that many or your attempts for a rewrite of the introduction have been reverted by various longstanding editors. I personally think your edits throw away too much prior work, but I would hate to see you get frustrated and stop editing. If you have issues or problems with the article as it now stands, you should bring the issues to the discussion page. I am starting a discussion there relating to a couple of issues raised by your edits.COGDEN 22:45, 10 November 2009 (UTC)

Thank you for your advice and encouragement. User:Lanthum