Laura.smith450
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editHi Laura. User:Shalor (Wiki Ed) is the Wikipedia expert assigned to your course. Please get in touch with her for assistance. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:15, 8 May 2018 (UTC)
Feedback
editHi! Here's my feedback:
- When citing a specific report, always make sure that you specify who wrote it and when the research took place - the word recent is fairly relative, as what's recent now may not be in a year's time. Something like "Research conducted in 2017 by This Person et al. states that..."
- On the notes of reports, be careful with studies. These are seen as primary sources for the claims and research conducted by the study. Being published by a reputable journal does help, but ultimately the publisher doesn't actually verify all of the research information or give any true response or reflection on the material - they just check to make sure that there aren't any glaring, obvious errors or omissions with the claims. Also, since this is a fairly science based area, I would like for you to review this module. While it states that it's on medical topics, it also covers science editing.
- The draft needs in-line citations in order to show what is backing up what claim.
I'm a little confused as to where this will be placed in the article Great Pacific garbage patch. It seems a little general, so it's hard to place where it's supposed to be or if it's going to replace anything. Let me know where this is going to go in the article, as I can give you more specific advice on this. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:22, 8 May 2018 (UTC)
My article you want to review
editHi Laura! With my article since it is already existing all I'm assigned is to take notes throughout the article and start to fix mistakes or improve the article. I was also confused about this so I contacted the professor and that is what she told me. Maybe just look over the article on Wiki then let me know of any typos or unaccredited information that I can find sources for. Thanks for letting me know! (:Cisneros.angelina (talk) 06:00, 10 May 2018 (UTC)