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Latest comment: 8 years ago by Le Van Luong in topic Article Critique

Article Critique

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This article provided the information about the definition, the function, and occurrence which is all true. However, this information is very general that makes Intracellular digestion is still ambiguous. Although there is only one source in the references, it is irrelevant as the link does not direct to the information what was provided.


What I want to improve:

There is more information that needs to be added and I will condense the introduction with brief explanation of the concept. Then, I would like to divide the article into several subtopics such as structure, function, and process. I will provide details about two types of intracellular digestion, which are heterophagic intracellular digestion and autophagic intracellular digestion. I will expand the information in the occurrences which is provided in the article.


Here are some preferences:

- https://www.jstor.org/stable/4443206?seq=1#page_scan_tab_contents

- https://books.google.com/books?id=JUKQBQAAQBAJ&pg=PA176&lpg=PA176&dq=heterophagic+intracellular+digestion&source=bl&ots=8YArnvfQ3n&sig=LVHe1ahLjiZ-T_lqYkxRPNcoXPU&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwiL5br8pfLPAhXFeD4KHfvDCtsQ6AEITjAI#v=onepage&q=heterophagic%20intracellular%20digestion&f=false

-https://books.google.com/books?id=ASADBUVAiDUC&pg=PA127&lpg=PA127&dq=intracellular+digestion+functions&source=bl&ots=hFQGymYOD7&sig=p8vsPmHtuGe3B12O63rcTJzOt88&hl=en&sa=X&sqi=2&ved=0ahUKEwj9uLH16JTQAhUINSYKHWEADzQQ6AEIcTAR#v=onepage&q=intracellular%20digestion%20functions&f=false

Le Van Luong (talk) 02:33, 24 October 2016 (UTC)Reply