-The information was well structured and not biased at all -Instead of rewriting the same citation, reuse the citation it should be availabe when you click to cite it -Try to add information about the Pitons when you first mention it. I had to look up what it was before I got to the end and realized it was described at the bottom of the page -Overall great additions to the article!!
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