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Your submission at Articles for creation: Trollbeads (August 22)

Latest comment: 6 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by SportingFlyer were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Deleted before on spam grounds, possible speedy delete candidate. Please make sure the article passes WP:NCORP before resubmitting.

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SportingFlyer talk 12:51, 22 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Hello, LisaLovstrom90! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! SportingFlyer talk 12:51, 22 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Trollbeads (August 24)

Latest comment: 6 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Jmcgnh was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Good, you've added some more references. Unfortunately, none of your references can be considered a notability reference - independent, in-depth coverage published by an outlet with a reputation for editorial control and fact checking.

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There is at least one passage in your draft that appears to be plagiarized, nearly word for word, from one of your sources. Your submission must be written in your own words.

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It is important to be clear on whether your subject is the company or the jewelry concept. It may be that the jewelry is notable but the company is not.

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Among the sources you cannot use to establish notability: the company's own website, recapitulations of the company's history from outlets selling their product, interviews of the company's personnel, press releases, and routine business directory entries.

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If you have a connection with the company, you need to disclose your conflict of interest or, if applicable, PAID status on your user page.

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Right now, the draft reads as pretty promotional. Previous attempts at articles on this subject have had to be deleted because they were irretrievably promotional. Don't let that happen to your draft. Tone it down.

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I'll repeat SportingFlyer's admonition: Do not resubmit this draft. Discard it entirely! Learn how notability for companies has to be established. Find the right sort of references. Start over, summarizing only information from the notability references. Once notability is established and the article is accepted, you can continue to expand the article with additional sources, but references to sites that are mainly involved in selling the product will not be allowed.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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— jmcgnh^{(talk) (contribs)} 09:09, 24 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Copyright problem: Draft:Trollbeads

Latest comment: 6 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia! We welcome and appreciate your contributions, such as Draft:Trollbeads, but we regretfully cannot accept copyrighted text or images from either web sites or printed works. This article appears to contain work copied from https://www.trollbeads.com/en-us/the-story/, and therefore to constitute a violation of Wikipedia's copyright policies. The copyrighted text has been or will soon be deleted. While we appreciate contributions, we must require all contributors to understand and comply with our copyright policy. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously, and persistent violators are liable to be blocked from editing.

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Thank you, and please feel welcome to continue contributing to Wikipedia. Happy editing! — jmcgnh^{(talk) (contribs)} 09:16, 24 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

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