User talk:Lkashef/sandbox

I like the direction of your edits. I appreciate that all of your edits are focused in one direction: adding policies and updating policies.

My main critique is that these are all US-centric edits whereas the article discusses other countries as well. My suggestion for how to address this would be to add in a section of the article about fracking regulations in the US. Another way to address this would be to create a US-specific Regulation of Hydraulic Fracturing article and link it into this article.

Another thing that I noticed in the article but is probably outside the scope of this class is that the only fracking policies mentioned are from the US or countries in Europe. In order for it to be less biased, some policies from other continents should be added. Gwej (talk) 23:46, 22 April 2017 (UTC)

Peer Review jjlennon

I am glad you are adding some policy information to this article as it is very needed. I also agree with what has been said in your other peer review about making a specific section for the US. I also think given your description of your intentions, that it will be important to remain encyclopedic, and avoid bias. Since the bulk of your edits will be adding policy information you should be careful, and show both sides to every argument. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jjlennon (talk • contribs) 05:13, 25 April 2017 (UTC)