Loreensherman

Loreensherman (talk) 23:12, 11 July 2010 (UTC)Hi, am I able to submit a second article and if so, how? Loreen Sherman

Are you asking how to get feedback on an article? You can create a subpage on WP:AFC at WP:AFC/Whatever your article title is or request feedback. Mr. R00t ^Talk 23:19, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

You may submit any number of articles at Articles for creation. —fetch·comms 23:20, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

You also have to add {{AFC submission/submit}} to the top of it. Mr. R00t ^Talk 23:22, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

Draft

I have moved the draft article to User talk:Loreensherman/draft one, to keep this talk page free for discussion. I will write more soon.  Chzz  ►  23:30, 24 June 2010 (UTC) (Loreensherman (talk) 21:30, 27 June 2010 (UTC))

{{helpme}}I thank you for your help in providing guides. I see that the article has been put into draft form, what are the next steps that I need to do?(Loreensherman (talk) 21:30, 27 June 2010 (UTC))

I took a look at the article and I thought that it looked pretty good. All I really think is that you could make it longer and maybe put more sources. The only reason I say anything of sources is because most people like to see articles with lots of sources. Not necessary but helpful. As for after that you probably could move it live. I would be happy to do that for you or teach you how. Mr. R00t ^Talk 21:37, 27 June 2010 (UTC)

(Loreensherman (talk) 22:16, 27 June 2010 (UTC)) {{helpme}} Please help me add the following: Submission for the Title of the Article, which is Formulaic Communication in the 21st Century

Four sources to add to the article: Reference 5 should be this Reference 13 should be

Reference 16 should be

I would greatly appreciate you helping me make this article live. Again, many thanks:)(Loreensherman (talk) 22:16, 27 June 2010 (UTC)).

 Done- all done, moving live. Mr. R00t ^Talk 22:25, 27 June 2010 (UTC)

Advice, further to discussions

• Be careful to avoid original research and synthesis
• Maintain a neutral point-of-view
• Be especially careful about using sources that you wrote - see WP:COI
• Do not over-use quotations
• Do not write it as a personal reflection or essay

Best advice, please read some 'good articles', preferably on broadly similar topic-areas, but does not have to be exactly the same area. For example;

• American family structure
• Polyethnicity
• Globalization and women in China

I chose those because I think they are also 'conceptual' in nature. You can find plenty more in WP:FA and WP:GA.

I hope this helps,  Chzz  ►  23:36, 24 June 2010 (UTC)

Welcome and introduction

Hi, Loreensherman. This is NOT some automated message...it's from a real person. You can talk to me right now. Welcome to Wikipedia! I noticed you've just joined, and wanted to give you a few tips to get you started. If you have any questions, please talk to us. The tips below should help you to get started. Best of luck!  Chzz  ►  23:36, 24 June 2010 (UTC)

ようこそ You don't need to read anything - anybody can edit; just go to an article and edit it. Be Bold, but please don't put silly stuff in - it will be removed very quickly, and will annoy people. Ask for help. Talk to us live, or edit this page, put {{helpme}} and describe what help you need. Someone will reply very quickly - usually within a few minutes. Play in your user area. For example, create User:Loreensherman/test. Edit existing articles, before you make your own. Look at some subjects that you know about, and see if you can make them a bit better. For example, Wikipedia:Cleanup#2009. When you're ready, read about Your first article. It should be about something well-known, and it will need references. Good luck with editing; please drop me a line some time on my own talk page. There's lots of information below. Once again, welcome to the fantastic world of Wikipedia! -- Chzz  ►  23:36, 24 June 2010 (UTC) Getting started A tutorial • Our five pillars • Getting mentored How to: edit a page • upload and use images Frequently asked questions • Tips Where to ask questions or make comments Request administrator attention Policies and guidelines Neutral point of view • No original research Verifiability • Grade sources • Cite sources What Wikipedia is not • Biographies of living persons External links • Spam • Vandalism Deletion policy • Conflict of interest • Notability The community Signpost • IRC channels • Mailing lists • Best articles Build consensus • Resolve disputes Assume good faith • Civility • Etiquette No personal attacks • No legal threats Writing articles Be bold in editing • Develop an article The perfect article • Manual of style Pages needing attention • Peer review The missing manual

Your user page User:Loreensherman

I'm concerned about your user-page, User:Loreensherman, because at the moment, I think it could be deleted under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person.

Instead of tagging it for deletion, I thought I would ask you about it. If you could perhaps 'tone down' the promotional nature, then I think it would be OK. It's fine to say a little about yourself (and what you do) - but it is not OK to promote; as it says in WP:USERPAGE, a small amount of info is acceptable, but Pages used for blatant promotion are not. For example a 5 page résumé and advertising for your band will probably be too much, a brief 3 sentence summary that you work in field X and have a band named Y will be fine.

Thanks,  Chzz  ►  23:51, 24 June 2010 (UTC) (Loreensherman (talk) 11:48, 26 June 2010 (UTC)). Please review the changes to the page as I have changed the content, and thanks for the advise. (Loreensherman (talk) 11:48, 26 June 2010 (UTC)).

Yes, that looks fine now, thanks. I'll answer your other question on my talk page, as soon as possible. Thanks again,  Chzz  ►  16:36, 26 June 2010 (UTC)

Reply

...now archived, in User talk:Chzz/Archive_23#Question About Submitting Draft. Chzz  ►  21:12, 30 June 2010 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation

Thank you for submitting an article to Wikipedia. Your submission has been reviewed and has been put on hold pending clarification or improvements from you or other editors. Please take a look and respond if possible. You can find it at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/The Progression of the Philosophy of Formulaic Communication. If there is no response within twenty-four hours the request may be declined; if this happens feel free to continue to work on the article. You can resubmit it (by adding the text {{subst:AFC submission/submit}} to the top of the article) when you believe the concerns have been addressed. Thank you. —fetch·comms 00:40, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

The Progression of the Philosophy of Formulaic Communication

Re. Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/The Progression of the Philosophy of Formulaic Communication

The article is awaiting review; there is no need to use a {{helpme}} there.

Please note, at the top, it does now say "Review pending. This request is waiting to be reviewed. This might take several hours, or even days, at busy times.".

After it has been reviewed, you will be told the outcome here.

If you have any specific questions, please use a {{helpme}} here, on your own talk page. Thanks,  Chzz  ►  16:23, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation

Your article submission has been declined, and Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/The Progression of the Philosophy of Formulaic Communication was not created. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer, and please feel free to resubmit once the issues have been addressed. (You can do this by adding the text {{subst:AFC submission/submit}} to the top of the article.) Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Fridae'§Doom | Talk to me 00:57, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation

Your article submission has been declined, and Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/The Progression of the Philosophy of Formulaic Communication was not created. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer, and please feel free to resubmit once the issues have been addressed. (You can do this by adding the text {{subst:AFC submission/submit}} to the top of the article.) Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Fridae'§Doom | Spare your time? 12:28, 18 July 2010 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation

The Progression of the Philosophy of Formulaic Communication, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

• The article has been assessed as B-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see what needs to be done to bring it to the next level.
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Thank you for helping Wikipedia! Fridae'§Doom | Spare your time? 04:40, 19 July 2010 (UTC)

In regards to your AfC Submission

I've just fixed up some errors, however, I noticed there were no External Links or See also links, since I don't know what websites are of relevance to the article and with you being the creator of the article you would have some knowledge on the subject so if you could find them then add a new heading for See Also or External Links that'd be great. The article is nicely done and great work with the sources. Your article is located here. Regards, Fridae'§Doom | Spare your time? 04:55, 19 July 2010 (UTC)

A Live Article

I have been working on The Progression of the Philosophy of Formulaic Communication but do not know if it went live. Could you confirm? Loreen Sherman(Loreensherman (talk) 16:16, 19 July 2010 (UTC)).

Yes, at The Progression of the Philosophy of Formulaic Communication. Bencherlite^Talk 22:15, 19 July 2010 (UTC)

Curious as to Link Article

You make links by just putting the exact article name in brackets; you can also 'pipe' a link from one wording to another, e.g.

This is a [[sausage]].

I am a [[Dentistry|dentist]].

[[John Smith (explorer)|John Smith]] was an [[England|English]] [[soldier]], [[explorer]], and [[author]].

The above appears as;

This is a sausage.

I am a dentist.

John Smith was an English soldier, explorer, and author.

For more, see WP:LINKING. Cheers,  Chzz  ►  19:05, 27 July 2010 (UTC)

Articles for creation/Four Tests Formulaic Communication Passes in Economics

Hi. You made an Article for creation page, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Four Tests Formulaic Communication Passes in Economics (2010-06-21), but it was never actually submitted for a review.

I have submitted it just now, so you should get feedback soon. Cheers!  Chzz  ►  06:05, 23 December 2011 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation

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