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Your submission at Articles for creation: Deanne Mazzochi (July 16)

Latest comment: 6 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bearcat was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Neither serving on the board of trustees of a local community college, nor being an as yet non-winning candidate in a future election, is a notability claim that gets a person into Wikipedia. People become notable as politicians by holding office, not just running for it, and absent that they have to already have preexisting notability for other reasons besides their candidacy to actually get a Wikipedia article before winning the election -- but serving on the board of a community college is not, in and of itself, a strong claim of preexisting notability either. This is also entirely too dependent on primary sources and glancing namechecks of her existence in media coverage that isn't about her, to claim that she passes GNG in lieu of failing to pass any of our subject-specific inclusion rules.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Bearcat (talk) 15:54, 16 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Hello, Lorisolyom! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Bearcat (talk) 15:54, 16 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Deanne Mazzochi (September 9)

Latest comment: 6 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Robert McClenon were:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Thank you for your submission, but the subject of this article already exists in Wikipedia. You can find it and improve it at Deanne Mazzochi instead.

The comment the reviewer left was:

On the one hand, Mazzochi is a member of the Illinois House of Representatives, and as such as political notability, and has a stub article. On the other hand, most of this draft is non-neutral and in the style of a campaign brief, and is not appropriate to add to the stub. The stub should be expanded, but in recognition of neutral point of view.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Deanne Mazzochi and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Deanne Mazzochi, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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Robert McClenon (talk) 07:10, 9 September 2018 (UTC)Reply

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