User talk:Lucathor
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Peer Review - Ovenbird1875
[edit]Hi Lucanthor,
Nice work on your edits! Here is a copy of my peer review, which can also be found in the dedicated peer review page:
Overall, the article on glacial geoengineering seems well-composed. It provides a balanced amount of information of different subjects and maintains a neutral tone throughout, which is difficult in such a controversial topic as bioengineering. I do feel that there is room for expansion on the concerns/drawbacks of the various geoengineering approaches. I think this would help the article be more balanced, as well as simply answer questions that come up while reading. Problems are listed, such as "ecosystem disruption," but I think it would be helpful if such issues were expanded upon and described in more detail.
Lucathor's edits are a step towards this, as they bring up the issues of water and energy cost in surface ice thickening. I think this is a useful addition. I suggest considering removing "this method is not without costs, though," as this could be considered opinioned or biased writing, and the point about energy use stands well on its own without this introduction.
Finally, as something of an aside, surface ice thickening is reminiscent of the stupas that we have learned about in class. I wonder if there is a place for that information to be useful here.