Marina51

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Your article on Amedeo Schiattarella

Thank you for contributing a new article. I am sorry if you have found the process confusing. I saw you were asking for help and didn't really find any.

I have now placed your article in User:Marina51/Amedeo Schiattarella so that you can work on it some more before publishing it as a Wikipedia article. I'm sure an article on this architect will be accepted, but first I'd ask you to make some changes:

• Grammar – statements about past events should go in the past tense. So, not "graduates in 1969" but "graduated in 1969".
• Commentary – the article contains many statements assessing Schiattarella's work. I mean sentences like:
  • "he stands out for his independency from the cultural context ..."
  • "These works, in a way, foresee that cultural trend..."
  • "These are years of testing new instruments and new techniques..."

Such statements as these need citations to published work by other commentators on architecture. If any of them are only your own opinion, I'm afraid they would be classified as "original research" and do not belong in the article. In particular, please remove what seem to be promotional words like "key player" unless you can point to published works by other writers who have used such descriptions.

• Remove URL links in the text (see this guidance). Some where we have Wikipedia articles can be made into Wikilinks, like King Fahd International Stadium. The firm's project page could be added to an "External links" section following the References (see ELCITE).

If any of this is not clear you are welcome to contact me at my talk page, or youmay put a question at the Teahouse where they specialise in helping new editors.

When you consider the article is ready, please use the blue button "Submit this draft for review" and an experienced reviewer will either pass it for publication or suggest any further changes. With regards: Noyster (talk), 08:22, 12 May 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Amedeo Schiattarella (June 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by TheSandDoctor was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Amedeo Schiattarella and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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TheSandDoctor (talk) 03:36, 28 June 2017 (UTC)

Hello! Marina51, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! TheSandDoctor (talk) 03:36, 28 June 2017 (UTC)

Draft:Amedeo Schiattarella concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Amedeo Schiattarella, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:35, 3 January 2018 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Amedeo Schiattarella

Hello, Marina51. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Amedeo Schiattarella".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. HasteurBot (talk) 18:01, 2 February 2018 (UTC)