Marlena, I didnt realize that you never received feedback at any stage of your assignment! I think that the use of bullets makes the article clear and easy to read and that is a plus! You would benefit from the use of footnotes for all of your references so that they can be easily found in the proper section. The information that you have covered is all very comprehensive and befitting an article of this type. Perhaps a bit more narrative would help to bring everything together? Thefashiongeek 9000 (talk)
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