User talk:Marlena Holmes/sandbox

Sources

You need two more sources. Josef Horáček (talk) 17:29, 29 October 2015 (UTC)

Thanks. Josef Horáček (talk) 21:10, 3 November 2015 (UTC)

The Lead

You were supposed to post a draft of the lead in your sandbox. Your lead looks good, but you need to do two things: 1. Make the person's name bold in the first sentence. Make it regular font in the next paragraph. 2. Divide the whole article into sections. The lead goes at the top with no section header. After that, you should have at least a couple of section headers. See other biography articles for examples. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:14, 1 November 2015 (UTC)

You haven't made the changes in the article I asked you to make. Josef Horáček (talk) 16:55, 10 November 2015 (UTC)