Please leave me comments with your signature , Thank you Mbritto5 (talk) 22:55, 13 September 2012 (UTC)Reply

Welcome!

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Welcome to Wikipedia, Mbritto5! Thank you for your contributions. I am MartinPoulter and I have been editing Wikipedia for some time, so if you have any questions feel free to leave me a message on my talk page. You can also check out Wikipedia:Questions or type {{helpme}} at the bottom of this page. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

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Peer Review

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Hi,

Overall, I think you did a great job of improving the quality of the info presented in the article, improving the clarity and organization of the article, clearly explaining the method and findings of your presented empirical study, as well as citing your material correctly according to Wikipedia guidelines. Originally, I was going to suggest not to cite directly within the paper and to use footnotes, but then I referred to the Wikipedia: Citing sources page and realized that there are several ways that are deemed appropriate for citing in Wikipedia.

If I were to make any suggestions, and note that they are merely my opinion, they would be to take out the fifth level subheadings. For example, Erikson’s 8 developmental stages could be organized using a numerical list, and the Existential and Categorical selves could be bolded or bulleted rather than creating a place within the contents list.

It is obvious that you have put much time into this article, good luck! Jvande48 (talk) 17:00, 6 November 2012 (UTC)Reply

Wikipedia Education Program: student survey!

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Hi! I work with the Wikipedia Education Program, and I'm hoping to get your feedback about your experience this semester! In order to help other students like you enjoy editing while contributing positively to Wikipedia, it would be very helpful to hear from real program students about their experience, so we know what to change. The survey takes no more than 10 minutes, and I'd really appreciate your response!

Thanks so much! JMathewson (WMF) (talk) 21:00, 17 December 2012 (UTC)Reply