Mcdiro20

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ghost Ship Harbor (August 14)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Dan arndt was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Dan arndt (talk) 01:43, 14 August 2018 (UTC)

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Ghost Ship Harbour Reply

The draft contains what appears to be original research, that is not supported by inline citations. The Fodor reference is essentially a reprint of a press release about the attraction. To satisfy the basic requirements, WP:GNG, the article requires significant coverage in multiple independent reliable secondary sources. I suggest that you have a look at some of the other existing articles (see Category:Haunted attractions (simulated) to give you an idea of format, style and referencing. Dan arndt (talk) 03:53, 14 August 2018 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Ghost Ship Harbor

Hello, Mcdiro20. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Ghost Ship Harbor".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 22:29, 17 February 2019 (UTC)