User talk:Mdgeorge85/sandbox

Benign tumor should have a wiki link108.200.240.239 (talk) 19:35, 3 April 2014 (UTC) I think you should explain why you are talking about malignant and benign tumors. I was a little confused about your topic since your first sentence is about malignant tumors and your second sentence is about benign tumors108.200.240.239 (talk) 19:35, 3 April 2014 (UTC) The introduction and treatment part is really good which give me the clear information. In the symptoms, I want to know the different symptoms between benign tumors and malignant tumors because the malignant tumor might develop from heart sarcoma. At last, I want to know how the symptoms change in different stage of the tumor which might be useful in the diagnosis.Starryheaven1988 (talk) 16:48, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

Sweiner02 (talk) 19:44, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

• Try to make things more lay accessible, especially the intro section.
• Mechanisms needs more detail on the theories that do exist, even if unconfirmed.
• Make sure to link to other wikipedia articles whenever possible
• Needs referencing
• Treatment section covers some really good stuff. I like the way you addressed prognosis and issues upfront, and then went on to specific treatments.

• Your article is well structured. here are few hints that you could use
• Try to make inline citation with a footnote
• Try to expand the mechanism a little bit more
• I did not see the reference section, I think you need to add the reference section by typing ==Reference== and right below the reference you can type reflist with two brackets before and after. I think you will be able to see all you sources displayed at the reference sectionMohammed Tofa (talk) 22:11, 8 April 2014 (UTC)