Hi Melinda.an,
Great job! Hashtags have definitely become extremely popular over time and its used so frequently by many different people. To read about how different popular figures have used the hashtag to gain popularity or to spark discussion about a certain issue, it was very fascinating.
A Couple of things to strengthen your argument even further:
1) "Actress Lina Esco, the founder of “Free the Nipple”, began the movement in an effort to spark discussions on gender inequality." - When mentioning the famous actress Lina Esco, maybe you can insert a hyperlink to the figure so that curious people can have easy access into looking into her if they are interested.
2) I feel like you could have gone into more detail into your overall argument. The article was left at a cliffhanger and I wish I read more.
But overall, great job! Thanks!
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