User talk:Melired/sandbox

Review of Impact of COVID-19 pandemic on education in the United States Initial contribution

Great job! Your article does well in covering a ton of aspects of this topic and will definitely give the reader a clearer understanding of what is going it. The creation of this article is very relevant, especially since this is a pivotal moment of COVID history in which many people are trying to understand better. Your sources seem great and comprehensive. My two suggestions are to expand your lead section a lot more (most important), so it includes actual impacts that you in fact detail in the next sections, and that you add images to your sandbox so that you can engage the reader more. Thank you for writing this article! Angelalin79 (talk) 15:50, 30 March 2021 (UTC)

Hi Melissa, this article looks great so far! Really great job outlining a lot of really important aspects of this topic. Everything that's written so far is thorough and well sourced, so I think it's mostly about filling out what you have so far. I agree with Angela that the lead would benefit from expansion, and also some mention of safety implications of schools opening and measures being taken. Other than that, I think it's going great and I look forward to seeing the finished article! Emilyp99 (talk) 18:54, 30 March 2021 (UTC)