Mfnance1229
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editHere are my comments on the articles you've selected, Mary:
Severe Weather: - This seems like a hub article, so it could be challenging if you can't discern a clear purpose/structure.
Juice: - This could be a good fit in terms of structure and purpose issues.
Fashion Accessory: - This is a great fit, as it needs a lot of work.
Chicken Nuggets - There are some sparse content areas, but it looks like it's been assigned by multiple people.
Aggravated sexual assault: - This is a great fit, since it needs an overhaul re: structure. It also seems to have stalled.
Overall: I recommend choosing Fashion Accessory and Aggravated sexual assault for this project, but it's ultimately your call. Let me know when you have chosen your two articles; happy to chat further with you on this project if you have questions. Spike Mugiwara (talk) 02:11, 22 September 2020 (UTC)
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:36, 29 September 2020 (UTC)
Your contributed article, Mfnance1229/Aggravated sexual assault
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Hello, I noticed that you recently created a new page, Mfnance1229/Aggravated sexual assault. First, thank you for your contribution; Wikipedia relies solely on the efforts of volunteers such as you. Unfortunately, the page you created covers a topic on which we already have a page – Aggravated sexual assault. Because of the duplication, your article has been tagged for speedy deletion. Please note that this is not a comment on you personally and we hope you will continue helping to improve Wikipedia. If the topic of the article you created is one that interests you, then perhaps you would like to help out at Aggravated sexual assault. If you have new information to add, you might want to discuss it at the article's talk page.
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- Hi Mfnance1229! It looks like you have been developing some changes for the Aggravated sexual assault article in your sandbox, and then attempted to make them live by moving your sandbox. I restored your sandbox to its previous state. Please have a look at the instructions for moving your changes from the sandbox to the article.--ragesoss (talk) 20:10, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
October 2020
editHi – thank you for your contributions but I'm not sure you understand fully how to edit Wikipedia. You have created the article Mfnance1229/Juice, but what you should do is make edits to the already existing article Juice, not create another article which essentially duplicates it with only minor changes. As with the Aggravated sexual assault article above, your version will be tagged for speedy deletion. Please make any further edits to existing articles – a new article should only be created if there is no existing Wikipedia article on the subject. Thank you. Richard3120 (talk) 00:55, 20 October 2020 (UTC)