Mjmannmsw
Hi and welcome, thanks for your article, it's a great start! I've cleaned up the first two "wikilinks" (links to other wikipedia pages) and the reference - you can see what I changed by clicking on the "history" tab at the top of the page. It's nearly ready to go live: if you have more references that would be good (you can reference offline material like books if you want). I thought sometimes the sentences were a bit long, which makes it slightly confusing. Contact me (by clicking on "talk" in my signature) if you have any questions. --Physics is all gnomes (talk) 18:30, 11 February 2011 (UTC)
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