Mkouhosei

Your submission at Articles for creation: QUADRANGLE (March 1)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Liance was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:QUADRANGLE and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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-Liance^{talk/contribs} 18:16, 1 March 2016 (UTC)

Hello! Mkouhosei, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! -Liancetalk/contribs 18:16, 1 March 2016 (UTC)

Your request for AfC assistance

Hello. What I meant by a "missing lead sentence" was the first sentence that introduces a Wiki article. For example, take a look at George Washington:

George Washington[...]was the first President of the United States (1789–97), the Commander-in-Chief of the Continental Army during the American Revolutionary War, and one of the Founding Fathers of the United States.

For example, in your article, the lead sentence might be something like:

QUADRANGLE is an alternative rock band from Japan, Tokyo.

Take a look at WP:LEDE for assistance on this if needed. Feel free to submit your draft again when you think you're ready. As always, thank you for your contributions on Wikipedia! They are appreciated! -Liance^{talk/contribs} 21:57, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: QUADRANGLE (March 8)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:  The comment they left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:QUADRANGLE and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page.
• You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

SwisterTwister talk 03:21, 8 March 2016 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:QUADRANGLE has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:QUADRANGLE. Thanks! SwisterTwister talk 20:26, 3 April 2016 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:QUADRANGLE

Hello, Mkouhosei. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "QUADRANGLE".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. 1989 (talk) 04:03, 2 January 2017 (UTC)