Mland19
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:12, 3 February 2016 (UTC)
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Death Wish Coffee
editHi Mland19. I've taken a look at your draft.
- I'm not sure what's going on with this section. References on Wikipedia are generated by inline citations and the reference list is built out automatically. There's no need to order references yourself or maintain the numbering. I've renamed that section for now, eventually you'll want to convert all those links to references and remove the section entirely (as it won't be needed--each reference used will be listed automatically in the section above it).
- A lot of the draft reads like promotional copy. A Wikipedia article will not normally include a detailed product breakdown nor extended coverage of a super bowl commercial (even if it was important to the subject). Remember, a wikipedia reader isn't interested in hearing the dramatic story of how some company succeeded. They're interested in learning neutral, factual information about that company. They are also not looking for product information or similar content, because they can get that more easily from the company's website and the like.
- Take a look at some existing pages on businesses (I've tried to find coffee roasters to keep things roughly similar) for context: Stumptown Coffee Roasters, Intelligentsia Coffee & Tea, La Colombe Coffee Roasters. None of these articles are perfect, but the style and structure are roughly what you want to shoot for.
I hope this helps, Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 11:03, 5 April 2016 (UTC)
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Note that any non-free images not used in any articles will be deleted after seven days, as described in section F5 of the criteria for speedy deletion. Thank you. bojo | talk 14:13, 21 June 2018 (UTC)