Mohsen Ghodrati
Hello
editI work on musical-instrument articles on Wikipedia, and was pleased to see your new article, Dozaleh. I see that it was returned to draft status, and I thought I should offer encouragement. Your article addresses an important musical instrument and should be finished. The easiest way to get this out of draft status, is to find some books or other sources that talk about it. If you decide you would like help, please let me know. Jacqke (talk) 14:46, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
Please help me thanks Mohsen Ghodrati (talk) 16:50, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
Hi again, I will certainly help. I had a little time and made a copy that I could work on without interfering with your article. user:Jacqke/Dozaleh I have to stop working for a while, but will continue later. You are welcome to take or change anything for your article. Best wishes, Jacqke (talk) 17:59, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
Thank u Mohsen Ghodrati (talk) 18:09, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
- Hi again. This morning I focused on adding references to the text you have written for the article. I think it would be interesting to add more, but I am afraid of translation errors in the sources of information that are available to me. It would be good to get a clear closeup photograph of the instrument's reed-tip, or a description, because the photos aren't clear. I am going to try and put the article in the main space again (so that it won't be a draft). If you want to improve it further, I'm willing to help. Best wishes, Jacqke (talk) 18:26, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
Welcome!
editHello, Mohsen Ghodrati, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions.
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before the question. Again, welcome! creffett (talk) 16:37, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
Life and career
editAn article you recently created, Doneli, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:
" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. — Sagotreespirit (talk) 18:39, 13 January 2021 (UTC)
- You can move it back to mainspace any time you're ready. Thanks for your contributions! — Sagotreespirit (talk) 19:05, 13 January 2021 (UTC)
- Hi again, your last article looks good. If you keep working on this one, I will try to help again like before, if that is ok. I'm working today, so it may be some time before I can do anything. Best wishes, Jacqke (talk) 19:09, 13 January 2021 (UTC)
Hello again,
I inserted references into your new article donali and added a little content. I hope you like the changes.
I have a suggestion: Could you create your new pages in the "sandbox" (found at the top of your screen)? If you create an article there, then other editors won't move it to draft. New articles without good references aren't allowed to remain on the English Wikipedia.
You can reuse sandbox for each new article.
The way we have been working is successful (you showing references and me putting them into the text). When you have finished writing (and references are added) the page can be moved into the main Wikipedia. This should stop your articles from being moved or removed. Best wishes, and I encourage you to keep it up. I'm learning a lot about Iranian music. Jacqke (talk)|
Thanks for your contributions to Kuzeh. Unfortunately, it is not ready for publishing because it has no sources. Your article is now a draft where you can improve it undisturbed for a while.
Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Alexandermcnabb (talk) 10:45, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
Concern regarding Draft:Kuzeh
editHello, Mohsen Ghodrati. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Kuzeh, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 19:06, 4 February 2024 (UTC)