Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (December 15)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Wikiisawesome was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
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Moon Knight

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To Whom It May Concern,

I have read that anyone can contribute to a wikipedia page. I have contributed to Moon Knight. The reason? There are a number of BIG TITLES at the top of the page stating that there are issues with the page. Also upon reading it there are glaringly obvious mistakes as noted by the BIG TITLES at the top saying so. Information is also very long winded and unnecessary in many parts. There is vital information missing in multiple areas. There is repetitive info which can be reduced. I have done so in the publication history especially from the 2006-2009 series onwards. I have also changed the massively long left hand box and made more appropriate changes to his powers, to the publications and issues and contributors. If you compare other superheroes pages to Moon Knight, MK looks dodgy and unkept. I am trying to fix some of that up! Why can I ask are my changes being changed? Why do I get revised. Wiki is FOR ANYONE to contribute to...not for someone else to say, sorry, even though your info is correct I want my stuff there. I wrote coherent and grammar correct sentences containing relevant info and changed the incorrect wording of some in place, the reasons the page says at the top there are issues!

I don't care much for other characters at all but whoever has written much of this up has not cited most of their material even to Marvel pages and has written it in a way that is not fitting of a quality article.

Matthew E: thebreadhilux@hotmail.com

Your draft article, User:Mothmz/sandbox

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Hello, Mothmz. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "sandbox".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Puffin Let's talk! 10:13, 26 June 2016 (UTC)Reply