User talk:Mvale086/sandbox

Prof Garcia's Comments

You did not following instructions, Mariana. Please go back and take a look at what you were supposed to do for this assignment. If you fall behind this early, you will not be able to catch up later. Alfgarciamora (talk) 14:35, 6 October 2016 (UTC)

Week 6: Nice job catching up! I really like the sources that you have used, and you have already posted some very useful sentences that you can put to use in your final article. Keep this up in the coming weeks - I think that if you keep this up, you will definitely excel in this project! Alfgarciamora (talk) 12:59, 12 October 2016 (UTC)

@Mvaleo86: Well done transferring stuff to your mainspace, Mariana, but it all looks very underdeveloped and incomplete. Is everything okay? I was expecting more from you for this assignment. Alfgarciamora (talk) 20:55, 4 November 2016 (UTC)

@Alfgarciamora: Thank you for your comment professor. I agree, it is very underdeveloped and incomplete. I wanted to do more, but time management has gotten the best of me. I have had a lot going on personally in terms of work, family, and changes occurring in my near future. However, that is not an excuse for my work. I should have managed my time better. I am aware that I need to improve greatly on the page within the next few weeks. I am sorry to have disappointed. Mvale086 (talk) 21:13, 8 November 2016 (UTC)

Peer Review

@Rhern240: Thank you so much for your feedback. I am not sure as to what exactly happened the last week, from my understanding and what I saw on my computer screen, it seemed like we both edited my sandbox at the same time. Regardless, I was able to see your notes and completely agree. I have edited my page since then and think it is a lot better than where it started. Thank you for your help! Mvale086 (talk) 22:51, 25 October 2016 (UTC)