Hi, This paragraph partially responded to feedback. Please revisit the quality of the writing and correct errors there, including the removal of all quotes. The paragraph should use your words only. The paragraph should not include language that is based on my earlier feedback. Also, please correct citations so they are appropriate to the Wikipedia site. Regards, Dr. Haenn
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