Nairmeera02
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:21, 18 October 2022 (UTC)
Peer Review
editHey there! Looking through your article, I found the lead, content, and overall structure and tone to be on par. I like that you added a lot of themes under the themes section because it does give more context to the novel itself. It is very thorough and detailed. The only suggestion I would make is maybe adding a character section so that you introduce the characters and provide some descriptions. Besides that, I think you have done a great job on this article! Yxrivm (talk) 19:44, 29 November 2022 (UTC)Yxrivm (talk) 19:44, 29 November 2022 (UTC)
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Peer Review
editGreat lede paragraph.
of 19 slave, not by 19 slaves
Reword the abolish sentence.
move the slave rebellion sentence up or rework the sentence, reads strange here.
good plot summary, re-read just to make sure it comes off clear to audience, seems a bit jumbled.
Link Purdue University, just for more context.
The "at the event" sentence is a little long and confusing.
The next paragraph is a bit confusing, remember we don't know the context like you.
Love the next subtitle!
Be careful for spelling errors, I changed the ones I found.
Rework the refuge paragraph.
Summary:
Overall, your page is in good shape, I would reread from an outside perspective just to fix those awkward sentences and paragraphs. A few times you make a comment without context or little explanation, I would just elaborate a bit more so it is easier to follow. You had a few spelling errors that I changed, so if you put this all on the actual page I would edit. You don't have many sources, so if possible I would add. Great work! Baileyberhannan (talk) 14:05, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
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Keep up the good work!