User talk:Nancykgarcia/sandbox

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@Nancykgarcia: Nice work on your article draft.

• There's a lot of important information on the existing GABRA2 article including {{infobox_gene}}, several footers and categories. As you update that article, make sure that existing information is preserved. If you're replacing sources, are you replacing them with better sources? Is any important information of links being lost? Remember that you aren't replacing the article wholesale, you're integrating your additions into an existing article.
• References go after punctuation, not before, and there shouldn’t be spaces before refs.
• Wikipedia articles don't have introductions, they have lead sections. Please see pages 7-9 of the Editing Wikipedia brochure.
• Your second reference is to the GABRA2 article. Not only can Wikipedia articles not be used as references for Wikipedia article, you will also be merging this draft into that article, making the reference point to itself.
• "Mouse Party", your 8th reference, is a learning resource. Wikipedia articles should be based on high-quality reliable sources, primarily recent review articles published in peer-reviewed sources. Please ensure that all your references meet the requirements of WP:MEDRS.
• Many of your references are incomplete. Please use the Cite tool in the Visual Editor to produce complete, properly-formatted references.
• Your spelling isn't consistent - you use both "behavior" (American English) and "behaviour" (British/Canadian English). While any variety of English is acceptable, it must be consistent within a single article.
• You need to add more links to other Wikipedia articles. Topics and terms that are likely to be unfamiliar to the average reader should be linked the first time they appear in the article. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:28, 31 March 2017 (UTC)