Nock526
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Welcome to Wikipedia, Nock526! I am The ed17 and have been editing Wikipedia for quite some time. I just wanted to say hi and welcome you to Wikipedia! If you have any questions, feel free to leave me a message on my talk page or by typing {{helpme}} at the bottom of this page. I love to help new users, so don't be afraid to leave a message! I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:
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Harich
editHello Nock! I hope that you have enjoyed writing here (and if you didn't, I also understand that)! :-) Here are a few comments for you:
- Like a normal history paper, you have to format your in-line citations; bare links don't suffice. I would recommend using {{cite book}} or doing it manually using the MLA or Chicago styles.
- Make sure that everything but the introduction has in-line citations; for example, where did you get the information in the "life" section?
- Your writing appears to be quite good!
- Otherwise it looks good, assuming that the article is complete, ie nothing is missing; I'm not in a position to judge that. Thanks for your contributions, and I hope you stick around after your project is over! —Ed (talk • majestic titan) 04:57, 15 April 2010 (UTC)